How is this -updated- introduction to werewolf story?

It's really good! I really like it! The thing you have done very well is using some of the 5 senses to add more description - it really takes your story to the next level. Your introduction definitely has me hooked, the story sounds very interesting and action-packed.Well done! You are a really good story writer :) It's honestly really good - trust me, if it was crap I would tell the truth aha, good job! xxx